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it's run down
this part, this mine
the smoke came out
producing clouds
no fret, no fear
constructions near
completed seer
to see things clear
by cogwheels emerging
it's sentience disturbing
no bloodwork
just live wire
[da.t#1]

First of, the raw text of [da #1] (--> to follow).

This is my first (published) poem in english, as I usually write in my native tounge.
See my primary outlet blog [fragment]: [link]

Please add critiques, good or bad. I hope I'll invoke some sort of response...
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